" Have a happy and prosperous New Year. May the blessings of the Lord enrich your family and friends, not only in wealth but in health, love and happiness."
This New Year was specifically for me. Because I went to
merit in the morning and in the evening I prayed over the year at Wang Yaow
temple with my brothers. There was the first time to pray over the year for me.
I was very excited.
On Tuesday 31st December,
my family had the New Year party. The foods and drink were delicious. There were
cooked by our big chef. The big chef was my grandmother.
On this vacation, my family and I didn’t
to travel in other place. But no one cared about it. For us, the important
thing was we stayed together.
Your writing is OK. I think that it is too short but I can understand in your story.
ReplyDeleteYou writing is well and use easy vocabulary make me understand.
ReplyDeleteIn this writing I found very little wrong grammar. I think your writing is so good.
ReplyDeleteGood story I want to have your's grandmother food.
ReplyDeleteHowever, I suggest you to write your story to longer more than this story.
DeleteI think your writing is so good^^
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